A 'chain of events' for making toast. Click each event in the chain to see what to do in the correct order.
1. It is important to make sure you have all the materials you need before you begin.
2. It is a good idea to do it with a friend. It is more fun that way!
3. Always get an adult to help you when you are working with hot food or appliances.
| Criteria | Always | Some | Rarely | Ideas for revision |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1. Do I have a goal or an aim? | ||||
| 2. Is the goal or aim clear and easily understood? | ||||
| 3. Have I listed all the materials needed? | ||||
| 4. Are the steps written in order? | ||||
| 5. Have I numbered each step? | ||||
| 6. Have I used appropriate action verbs to give instructions? | ||||
| 7. Does my writing instruct or direct? | ||||
| 8. Have I used diagrams, illustrations or charts? | ||||
| 9. Have I used simple nouns and noun groups? | ||||
| 10. Have I used conjunctions to sequence the events so they flow? | ||||
| 11. Have I used action verbs to start sentences? | ||||
| 12. Have I used adverbial phrases to give details as to how, where and why things happen? | ||||
| 13. Have I used present tense all the time? | ||||
| 14. Have I edited my work to correct spelling and punctuation mistakes? |